You got me kicking my feet in the air when I'm reading this one. I absolutely love the way you depicted a young adult Severus in this! The dialogue between him and Isla is just wonderful! The balance between a strict, perhaps maybe overly severe, professor and a patient father is truly perfect. I'm not going to lie, I really strive to make my own work to your level.
You got me kicking my feet in the air when I'm reading this one. I absolutely love the way you depicted a young adult Severus in this! The dialogue between him and Isla is just wonderful! The balance between a strict, perhaps maybe overly severe, professor and a patient father is truly perfect. I'm not going to lie, I really strive to make my own work to your level.
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