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"Princeps Protego" (Severus/Lily) M
#1 · January 1, 2025, 2:11 pm
Characters/Pairings: Severus/Lily
Ratings/Warnings: Mature
Summary: When Severus Snape reaches his journey's end, he finds himself at a crossroads. A choice that could alter the course of his existence. Severus stands face to face with the jury of the dead and because of it, he finds himself in a bit of a conundrum. "I can relive my life without my memories? What's the catch?"
FF.net or AO3, choose your poison. Hope you guys have fun reading!
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#2 · January 2, 2025, 5:56 am
You're doing very well with your characterisation of Snape, your exploration of Death, and the places this plot could go in the future. I saw everything was in the past tense, but you did slip into the present occasionally, so just keep that in mind for future chapters. Keep writing! 🙂
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