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mmlf on January 2, 2025, 5:56 am
You're doing very well with your characterisation of Snape, your exploration of Death, and the places this plot could go in the future. I saw everything was in the past tense, but you did slip intot he present occasionally, so just keep that in mind for future chapters. Keep writing! 🙂
You're doing very well with your characterisation of Snape, your exploration of Death, and the places this plot could go in the future. I saw everything was in the past tense, but you did slip intot he present occasionally, so just keep that in mind for future chapters. Keep writing! 🙂
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