HA HA! I'VE COMPLETED THE CHAPTER! Once more thank you for the grammar advice! Now, I have another question about characterization. Do you think I've made the characters (pretty much the students at Hogwarts), sound like teenagers? I'm trying to capture that faux-confidence/sureness teenagers can portray while also ensuring that I demonstrate some of the insecurity teenagers feel at that age.
HA HA! I'VE COMPLETED THE CHAPTER! Once more thank you for the grammar advice! Now, I have another question about characterization. Do you think I've made the characters (pretty much the students at Hogwarts), sound like teenagers? I'm trying to capture that faux-confidence/sureness teenagers can portray while also ensuring that I demonstrate some of the insecurity teenagers feel at that age.
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